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ImplementsA rake and spade lean againsta lemon tree, its fruits are beacon on misty blue.Rain trickles down wooden shafts, the lawn sighs as does the gardener when glancing through yesterdays...
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I must admit I misread this bit -"its fruits are (a)beacon on misty blue."as"its fruits are bacon on misty blue."~ Must be the Danish influence Makes me wonder what the gardener read to make him/her...
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you are right i couldn't get this fucking poem right have rewritten it out of stubborness a hundered time.the fruit bit is wrong, wish someone would rewrite it for mei'm sick and tired of this poem it...
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Lol - sorry, but your reply made me laugh.Jan, I'll rewrite it for you - just tell me why the gardener sighs, that'sthe bit I don't quite get.Matt Fellowship of the Pen- Unravelling
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Interesting"If I can't be a good example, I'll just have to be a horrible warning." ~ James Leija
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What about this, Jan?The rake and spade wait againstthe lemon tree; its fruits, beacons in the mist.Rain trickles down wooden shafts; the lawn sighs, as does the gardener while browsing through...
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I know the feeling Jan! Keep going though it's a good poem. I like RG's version - do you think that would do?'Love beauty, it is the shadow of God on the universe.'-Gabriela Mistral"I enjoy...
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...but it has not bacon in it. Maybe the gardener sighsbecause of the price of keeping a pig. Afterall pigsdo feature in Jan's poems from time to time. Matt
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Just For Matt.The rake, a spade, waits againstthe lemon tree; he desire's his fruits, like cooked bacon - crusty and flavour full.There comes one now through the mistRain trickles down his wooden...
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How about 'beacon fruits shining on misty blue'?"I enjoy AllInAPen~manship"
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